Waking at half past 4am
In tired groggy gaze
Dosing gently till 5am
In a half a dream like haze
Racing against infernal clock
Leave the house at half past five
Embarking on a two mile walk
Wondering how you’ll ever survive
Train leaves the station at six and twenty
But it only chugs along to the first stop
Barely five minutes and that’s more than plenty
Time for a transportation swap
Maintenance on the train lines
Forces the replacement bus
No-ones regular commuting designs
Irritating but a necessary must
For over an hour and forty minutes
The wheels on the bus go around
Frustratingly within the speed limits
Slowly to work passengers are bound
At the busses termination
There’s still a ways to go
Another short train on this migration
This morning is incredible slow
To get into the city it’s now quarter past eight
But the journeys not even over yet
One further connection and a moment to wait
Too tired to be truly upset
Last train of the morning speeding along
Last stretch to work underway
Tired from a commute incredibly long
And it’s barely the start of the day
All this before the working day has begun
Exhausted, desperately wishing for bed
This morning has surely lacked any fun
To work here, you must be out of your head
Cameron D Hamilton 28/02/2017
The preceding poem was inspired by the commute I had to take to work last Saturday (25/02/17). It wasn’t a particularly pleasant morning and is a recurring problem for me. I have a job I’m really enjoying however due to ridiculous operational hours and poor public transport I’ll have to leave it in a couple weeks time. It’ll be a shame to leave, but I wouldn’t wish a four and a half our commute in the morning on anyone. I hope you lovely readers enjoyed this, I’m not even sure I really enjoyed writing it. I feel exhausted even just thinking about it.
Sounds utterly painful.
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Trust me it was. I hope never to do it again…. well atleast not at stupid o’clock in the morn 😔
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Oh, yucky…is moving an option?
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Sadly not, my option, the only option I have is quitting. Not best pleased by it but I still have time to pick something else up. Hope is not lost.
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