My waking thoughts
Are devoted to you
My body aches
To feel you
Melt
Within me
Taking over my senses
Explosions of delight
From first touch
Till last lick
Satisfaction
Only you can bring
Come closer
Let me undress you
Unwrapping the treat
You’ve been hiding from me
The one I’ve been lusting for
But don’t rush
Peel away those outer layers
You won’t need them
Slowly
Delicately
I want to savour the moment
Withhold yourself from me
Seduce me
Tease me
As you reveal
Everything I crave
Till I can take no more
Till I fall to you
Begging to touch
To feel
To taste
Your scent fills me
With ravenous desires
I long to swallow you whole
Lips tremble at the thought
Of enveloping
That silken smooth skin
Hard to the touch
But when we touch
We’ll melt together
Each time I breathe in
That arousing aroma
Awakens me
Takes me away
From the banality
Of reality
Finally feeling alive
Dancing delicately through the air
Enveloping me in craving lust
Before I you
I need
I must
Have you
Pushing between
Desperate waiting lips
Caressing gently as you enter
The warmth inside
That aches to be filled
And only you will do
No other can delight
And excite as you do
The waves of ecstasy
Pulsing through my body
As finally I taste
That which I want
That
Which I so desperately need
Aching for your hardness
To melt inside me
Leaving me filled
Your own warmth trickling
As hard becomes soft
Fulfilled and satisfied
Yet my insatiable appetite
Wont rest with just one moment
In heavenly bliss
That first taste
That first piece of you
Will have me begging for more
The day is never complete
Without allowing myself a taste
To enjoy the simple pleasures
You so effortlessly provide
A day without feeling your touch
Is a living nightmare
The pains are too much to bear
Craving you every single day
No one else can play
With my senses
Like you do
Who else can help me to relax
And bring me to climax
Like you do
My heart melts a little more
Each time I feel you
Melt in me
I’ve fallen to lust filled desires
So many times
It makes sense
That my heart
Would fall too
Fill me once more my sweet
Make me moan
In overjoyed ecstasy
Just one more piece
One last time
Before the day is done
Melt for me again
I demand every last droplet
Of the pleasure
You provide
My sweet, arousing
Intoxicating
Chocolate
Cameron D Hamilton 27/08/2016
Inspired by a conversation with J – Among Other Things, J
I’m afraid that for this particular poem, I lack the necessary feminine voice to make an audio recording to showcase it properly. I certainly hope all you lovely readers have enjoyed the words alone.
Totally a turn on. Great way to wake up, thanks! Well done! The master of the surprise ending. 😉
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Ahahaha, I do love a misdirect so I do!! 😄
This was a lot of fun to write it’s really different for me but somehow my voice sings through it to reveal thr madness.
It was barely a comment made in passing but I latched onto in it quite the delightful way.
I’m glad it’s woke you up with a smile 😊
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Oh jeez!What a seductive chocolate it must be.☺
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From what I’ve read about women it’s all seductively moreish. Although the book I read was from the 60s when women were only first discovered as having ‘desires’
Ahahaha 😄
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Gorgeous! What a great conversation you had to inspire this !
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The weird ans wonderful things that can come from speaking with me 😄
So happy you enjoyed it, I utterly loved writing it!!
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Awwe… Wonderful I’m certain! 😊
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Cameron, you are naughty!! That was excellent. You little tease. 😉
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Ahahaha, well I ever so glad you approve ❤
It’s a little different from me but it wouldn’t be me of I didn’t thrown a misdirection.
Big smiles because you enjoyed it!! 😊
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Yes, I enjoyed it. It was really hot and then funny. Pretty hard to pull off, lol. 😀
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I disagree, I found it really to pull of while writing it…oh…wait…you were talking about the misdirect…never mind 😉
I adore setting up misdirections, I’ve done a good few now but this one is totally my favourite. If only I were female I wound be able to record it and truly do it justice ahahaha!!!
Still I’m really happy it worked and that the naughtier content inflamed an imagination or two 😊
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Lol! Naughty boy! Yes, too bad you don’t sound like a girl. 😄 It was great anyway!
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Ahahaha, seems I have a volunteer so maybe I might get a recording out of this.
Still I’m so very pleased you enjoyed it!!
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I was having chocolate and this poem came coincidentally. And really I enjoyed it and surprised at the end that it was about chocolate 😅😅😅 very amusing 😃😃😃💗💗💗💗💗
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I’m glad you liked it and got lulled into my erotic web of misdirection.
That’s quite the coincidence my dear, you’ll have to tell me if you had any of those feelings for your chocolate 😉
So very happy you enjoyed this I really adore it!!!
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Hahahaha….it really turned me on and at the end made me giggle a lot. 😀 😀 😀
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My oh my, did it really 😶
Well I’m glad you thoroughly enjoyed it 😄❤
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Damn, Cameron! Look at you getting the women all excited!! I love that you wrote this 🙂 You should have asked me to voice it!
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Yes it has had quite the excites effect, I’ve rather enjoyed it!!
I’m so very pleased you enjoyed it considering it was your idea!
I never even thought to ask. Might be nice to add on at a later date!
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I think all the buzz proves we are quite the team 🙂
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We are indeed. This will only lead to trouble!
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Destruction of planet!
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…well to start 😄
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Yes j should totally voice this!!!!!! And OMG cam that was just…..damn boy rofl
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Ahahahaha!!! Oh did you enjoy it? Ahaha 😄
J might need to now it’s gone down so well!!
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I did quite enjoy it thank you. I think j would make lovely work of this!
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We shall have to see. Maybe it’s nicer that there’s no recording you get to hear your own voice discover the lusts 🔥❤🔥
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You make a valid point. 😄
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Oh boy Cameron! For a moment I thought you were really off direction ….till I spotted the image.
So ecstatic.Wonderful work. Loved it. 👍😄
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Awww thank you so very much. I glad you enjoyed this little misdirect and the naughtiness to get there 🔥❤
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My pleasure as always my dear, one hell of a witty fellow you are😄 All the best. 👍
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Awww you’ll make me blush 😶
Thanks for the support 😊
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Pleasure is all mine 😊
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Brilliant doesn’t begin to describe. I need to get used to your misdirect. But then sex and chocolate – they both release into the body the same chemicals. Here’s to my undying love….. for chocolate.
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I do love the misdirects so much. This is now my favourite it’s a perfect blend and so unusual for me to write about. It was fun to wrote but I never knew if it would land as I don’t think I have the chops for erotic writing.
I’m so very pleased you enjoyed this…and chocolate of course 😄
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Believe me… you can do erotic. As well as you do chocolate! 🙂
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Ahaha oh can i now? 😶
Well I might have to experiment some more in the coming months, I don’t think I’m going to be able to beat this one without some practice 😄
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lol You don’t need to practice! Your execution was perfect
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Awww well I’m rather shocked to hear that but more pleased that you’ve enjoyed the naughty misdirection 😄
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Very amayzing
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Thank you very much I really did enjoy this one!
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Haha enjoyed reading this
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Glad you enjoyed it, it’s a tad different for me, but it seems to have went over rather well!
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Very very well
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A very naughty piece.
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I love this piece. It spawned from a conversation I had with a friend on here who loved the misdirection poems I had written. She mentioned sex and chocolate and the challenge was accepted. I still think this piece is incomplete, it needs to have a sensual reader done by a female voice… Sadly mine won’t fit 😄
I’m delighted you enjoyed it!!
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I’m sure there are some people who would like your voice reading this.
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I wrote this with such a view to it being in a female voice that I can’t read it with any other voice in my head. I’m sure I could do a serviceable job but I’ve such a particular view for this piece.
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I completely understand what you mean Cameron.
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