My waking thoughts

Are devoted to you

My body aches

To feel you


Within me

Taking over my senses

Explosions of delight

From first touch

Till last lick


Only you can bring



Come closer

Let me undress you

Unwrapping the treat

You’ve been hiding from me

The one I’ve been lusting for

But don’t rush

Peel away those outer layers

You won’t need them



I want to savour the moment

Withhold yourself from me

Seduce me

Tease me

As you reveal

Everything I crave

Till I can take no more

Till I fall to you

Begging to touch

To feel

To taste



Your scent fills me

With ravenous desires

I long to swallow you whole

Lips tremble at the thought

Of enveloping

That silken smooth skin

Hard to the touch

But when we touch

We’ll melt together

Each time I breathe in

That arousing aroma

Awakens me

Takes me away

From the banality

Of reality

Finally feeling alive

Dancing delicately through the air

Enveloping me in craving lust

Before I you

I need

I must

Have you



Pushing between

Desperate waiting lips

Caressing gently as you enter

The warmth inside

That aches to be filled

And only you will do

No other can delight

And excite as you do

The waves of ecstasy

Pulsing through my body

As finally I taste

That which I want


Which I so desperately need

Aching for your hardness

To melt inside me

Leaving me filled

Your own warmth trickling

As hard becomes soft

Fulfilled and satisfied

Yet my insatiable appetite

Wont rest with just one moment

In heavenly bliss

That first taste

That first piece of you

Will have me begging for more



The day is never complete

Without allowing myself a taste

To enjoy the simple pleasures

You so effortlessly provide

A day without feeling your touch

Is a living nightmare

The pains are too much to bear

Craving you every single day

No one else can play

With my senses

Like you do

Who else can help me to relax

And bring me to climax

Like you do

My heart melts a little more

Each time I feel you

Melt in me

I’ve fallen to lust filled desires

So many times

It makes sense

That my heart

Would fall too



Fill me once more my sweet

Make me moan

In overjoyed ecstasy

Just one more piece

One last time

Before the day is done

Melt for me again

I demand every last droplet

Of the pleasure

You provide

My sweet, arousing






Cameron D Hamilton 27/08/2016


Inspired by a conversation with J – Among Other Things, J


I’m afraid that for this particular poem, I lack the necessary feminine voice to make an audio recording to showcase it properly.  I certainly hope all you lovely readers have enjoyed the words alone.


49 thoughts on “Melt

    1. Ahahaha, I do love a misdirect so I do!! 😄
      This was a lot of fun to write it’s really different for me but somehow my voice sings through it to reveal thr madness.
      It was barely a comment made in passing but I latched onto in it quite the delightful way.
      I’m glad it’s woke you up with a smile 😊

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        1. I disagree, I found it really to pull of while writing it…oh…wait…you were talking about the misdirect…never mind 😉

          I adore setting up misdirections, I’ve done a good few now but this one is totally my favourite. If only I were female I wound be able to record it and truly do it justice ahahaha!!!

          Still I’m really happy it worked and that the naughtier content inflamed an imagination or two 😊

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  1. rakhioverhere

    I was having chocolate and this poem came coincidentally. And really I enjoyed it and surprised at the end that it was about chocolate 😅😅😅 very amusing 😃😃😃💗💗💗💗💗

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    1. I’m glad you liked it and got lulled into my erotic web of misdirection.
      That’s quite the coincidence my dear, you’ll have to tell me if you had any of those feelings for your chocolate 😉

      So very happy you enjoyed this I really adore it!!!

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    1. I do love the misdirects so much. This is now my favourite it’s a perfect blend and so unusual for me to write about. It was fun to wrote but I never knew if it would land as I don’t think I have the chops for erotic writing.
      I’m so very pleased you enjoyed this…and chocolate of course 😄

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    1. I love this piece. It spawned from a conversation I had with a friend on here who loved the misdirection poems I had written. She mentioned sex and chocolate and the challenge was accepted. I still think this piece is incomplete, it needs to have a sensual reader done by a female voice… Sadly mine won’t fit 😄
      I’m delighted you enjoyed it!!

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